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Sunday, 11 November 2012

My Dream Girl!





Albeit, I mean a chatter-box,
but her charisma makes me feel; even I don’t know how to talk.
She exudes confidence with her style of walking,
but don’t know why mine always gets gawky.

Her benevolence makes her more beautiful,
I don’t know even how to get dutiful.
She doesn’t even let a grimness shatter someone,
then how could I flatter her.

I know she is not a chauvinistic,
but don’t know if her family would give me a kick.
I don’t want to make a hash of her life,
but promise to fondle her day & night.

She doesn’t hobnob with everyone,
it gives me a doubt, if I am ‘Someone’.
I gathered my valor to give a shot
&, babbled until she made me stop.

Her three beautiful words froze me,
but her laughter broke the silence, & amazed me.
My Dream Girl is now mine,
I pray, our bond would always shine.




This post has been written for the contest Write Over the Weekend (WOW!) organized by Blogadda.




 This post has been selected as a WOW! post, an initiative by Blogadda.

20 comments:

  1. Adorable and cute :-)
    Happy Diwali!

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  2. Thank you, Happy Diwali to you & your family too! :)

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  3. This is such a melodious read. Enjoyed reading it. :)

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  4. Full of innocence and purity, loved it! :) Happy Diwali! :)

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    1. Love is just like that. Happy diwali to you & your family too :)

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  5. It was so sweet. lovely. :)

    http://www.anshulgautam.in/2012/11/stillness.html

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  6. So very cute, a real fairy tale :)

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    1. Thanks for the compliment! happy diwali :)

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  7. Delicious....reminds me of my angel♥ when she was a little girl....involving piece.Excellent.
    Happy Diwali, Gayatri.

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    1. Ah,I am blessed! HaPPY DIWALI to you & your family :)

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  8. Hey Gayatri.. this one is beautiful.. loved it!

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  9. beautiful poem..

    She doesn’t hobnob with everyone,
    it gives me a doubt, if I am ‘Someone’

    loved this line..
    keep up the good work gayatri..

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    1. Thank you, dear! Keep visiting here. :)

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  10. Cheers for such a WOW!! moment my dear! :)
    Hearty Congrats to you!

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  11. beautiful beautiful poem :):)
    Congrats for getting selected by Blogadda :)

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