My love for you is not a fake,
it might be not a chocolate cake.
Though it’s still very much raw,
& we have our own flaw(s).
But every bond goes through turmoil,
& we may prevent it with foil.
My demeanor might be little bitter & gall,
but I get you, even when you say nothing at all.
There might not be a single clue,
but my love is only you.
I love you!
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by Blogadda.
beautiful poem (y)
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear Abhishek! :)
Deletenice poem and good rhyming.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana dear! :)
Deletenice!
ReplyDeletethanks, AS! :)
DeleteOh so romantic :)
ReplyDeleteI too believe that a "not a fake love" is better than "a chocolate cake".
Loved it :D
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I am glad that you loved it. Thanks, Rupertt! :)
DeleteLovely poem !!! Seems to be for someone special :P
ReplyDeleteYes, it's written for WoW, an initiative by Blogadda. Hahaha..... :)
DeleteSo glad to see you here after such a long time. Thank you, dear! :)
Sometimes we can't express our intense feelings ...
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Thanks for your appreciation, dear! :)
Deletethanks, Shaivi! :)
ReplyDeleteLast couple of lines made it extra sweet. Good poem, Gayatri.
ReplyDelete;) Thank you very much, dear! :)
Deleteawesome...great work of poetry..romantic...
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, dear :)
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