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Sunday, 7 July 2013

Love is you



My love for you is not a fake,
it might be not a chocolate cake.

Though it’s still very much raw,
& we have our own flaw(s).

But every bond goes through turmoil,
& we may prevent it with foil.

My demeanor might be little bitter & gall,
but I get you, even when you say nothing at all.

There might not be a single clue,
but my love is only you.


I love you!


This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by Blogadda.



18 comments:

  1. Oh so romantic :)

    I too believe that a "not a fake love" is better than "a chocolate cake".

    Loved it :D

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    1. I am glad that you loved it. Thanks, Rupertt! :)

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  2. Lovely poem !!! Seems to be for someone special :P

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    1. Yes, it's written for WoW, an initiative by Blogadda. Hahaha..... :)
      So glad to see you here after such a long time. Thank you, dear! :)

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  3. Sometimes we can't express our intense feelings ...
    sweet one :)

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation, dear! :)

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  4. Last couple of lines made it extra sweet. Good poem, Gayatri.

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  5. awesome...great work of poetry..romantic...

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